Sunday, September 18, 2011

English help?

How to fix these setence either its a runon ,a fragment,or a complete sentence?


3.For more than 20 years,sailors have competed in a boat race called Around Alone.





4.He had laptop computer for checking electronic charts and weather maps.





5.He checked electronic charts and weather maps.With a laptop computer that he had.





6. He had a laptop computer, he checked electronic charts and weather maps with it.





7.Then he would move on,swishing his tail in Rabbit's angry face.





8.Then he would move on.Swishing his tail in Rabbit's angry face.





9.He dozed,Cricket combed and clipped.





10.Possum loosened the scarf and leaped onto the dance floor.





11.Possum loosened the scarf, he leaped onto the dance floor.








12.Carson's mother knew that education was the answe for her children.





13. Carson's mother knew the answer for her children,it was education





14. Carson's mother knew .That education was the answer for her children.|||3. complete


4.complete


5. fragment- get rid of the period


6. runon-- he had a laptop computer that he checked electronic charts and weathermaps with.


7. complete


8. fragment- make it the same as 7


9. fragment- as he dozed, cricket combed and clipped.


10. complete


11. fragment- add as to the front


12. complete


13. runon- make comma a period


14. fragment- get ride of period

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